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 title: Matrix
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-Matrix is an open-source communications platform, allowing you to chat to communities of your choice. End to end encryption is a large focus of Matrix, and it's also completely open source.
+Matrix is an open-source communications platform, allowing you to chat to communities of your choice. An important feature of Matrix is its end to end encryption, allowing you to talk privately and securely.
 
 ## Comparison to Discord
 
-Matrix has many parallels to Discord, but also many differences. This comparison may be useful to you when migrating:
+Matrix has many parallels to Discord, but also some important differences. This comparison may be useful to you when migrating:
 
-- Instead of Discord "channels", you have Matrix "rooms". Rooms can both be joined with in a space (explained below), or standalone, unlike Discord. They can be set up to be end to end encrypted, but for large rooms it's more reliable to run without encryption.
+- Instead of Discord "channels", you have Matrix "rooms". Rooms can both be joined within a space (explained below), or standalone, unlike Discord. They can be set up to be end to end encrypted, but for large rooms it's more reliable to run without encryption.
 - The equivalent of a Discord "server" is a matrix "space". Spaces are essentially a directory of rooms, where they are grouped under one icon (depending on your client), and rooms within the space are shown and are available to join. However, you do not have to join all rooms in a Matrix space.
 
 ## Choosing a Client